[He looks back at the camera, holding up the comic.]
This comic sucks! I know it's tough to do a dimensional shenanigans plot, but even by that standard the writing's shoddy and the dialogue is poor. The most eye-catching thing about this comic is the blatant Sailor Moon parody at the beginning, and even that was rushed and more disturbing than it was funny! Nobody wanted to see Robotnik in a skirt and pigtails, thank you.
As for you... [He throws the comic on the couch and turns to Minako, though his tone isn't nearly as rough as it was when he was lambasting the comic.]
One: Watch your format. Nobody has the attention span to hang around for two hours, unless you plan on making a movie. You've got twenty minutes per episode, forty tops if you've got a really good plot hook at the end, and that's it.
Two: Cut it down to the jokes that are actually funny. That's part of the reason you should only run twenty minutes. Watching someone rage forever isn't funny unless you're the Nostalgia Critic, which you aren't, thank God. I don't think any dimension could handle more than one of him.
Three: Lose the outfit. At the risk of sounding like Spoony, there can only be one. Leave it to the professional.
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[He looks back at the camera, holding up the comic.]
This comic sucks! I know it's tough to do a dimensional shenanigans plot, but even by that standard the writing's shoddy and the dialogue is poor. The most eye-catching thing about this comic is the blatant Sailor Moon parody at the beginning, and even that was rushed and more disturbing than it was funny! Nobody wanted to see Robotnik in a skirt and pigtails, thank you.
As for you... [He throws the comic on the couch and turns to Minako, though his tone isn't nearly as rough as it was when he was lambasting the comic.]
One: Watch your format. Nobody has the attention span to hang around for two hours, unless you plan on making a movie. You've got twenty minutes per episode, forty tops if you've got a really good plot hook at the end, and that's it.
Two: Cut it down to the jokes that are actually funny. That's part of the reason you should only run twenty minutes. Watching someone rage forever isn't funny unless you're the Nostalgia Critic, which you aren't, thank God. I don't think any dimension could handle more than one of him.
Three: Lose the outfit. At the risk of sounding like Spoony, there can only be one. Leave it to the professional.
[Well? Anything to say for yourself, Minakara?]